Learning Outcome 1:

My revision has admittedly been lacking over this semester. Due to my peers not being able to offer a lot of criticism about my essays, I did not feel as though I needed to edit much. I believe this may be due to the nature of my writing. I usually try to find a melodic flow but coupled with some pretty intellectual content. This had the potential to either interest or confused my peers, and that usually led to an improper, and often useless peer review. This made my revisions lacking, and I mainly focused on local revision in the early part of the semester. Towards the end of the semester, I did grow and adapt to useless peer comments, and this forced me to open up and improve upon global revisions. You’ll see from my early papers such as “Art Integration into Science” that I make next to no edits, but this changed a bit towards the end of the semester, with the essay “The Enigma of Beauty.” here, I realized that I would benefit from writing a bare-bones essay and adding in the little details after, because it is easier to change global ideas than local knit picks.  https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cJjf6IFHgCN26JOBuqAISI6eHpsGtXUkPuCRRvsum1M/edit

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1S4eceFkNBtlqmkycTrsiz4Wc5Ab4t6JjGW5HvRo_Qa0/edit